[04.01.2024] Spelling/Grammar, AnKing Overhaul for Step 1 & 2/AnKingMed, ID 1259284

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*occurring

Original seems fine. Change implies it occurs at other time frames following surgery. Can it occur outside of hours after surgery?

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What if we change it to like:

Immediate postsurgical fever which occurs within hours of the operation can be due to what causes?

Might be having a brain fart, but I feel both work grammatically. Fine with either

I think it’s just that the original, though gramatically correct, sounds awkward + is a mouthful? idk

Might actually be the end of sentence tripping us up? Formatting as the following sounds a lot better to me:

Immediate postsurgical fever occurs within hours of the operation and may be due to:

cloze
cloze
etc

Yea this is much better
Gonna update the suggestion