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Seems fine as is to me? Not sure what difference this conveys
This is to contrast nid:1463280041950
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I think maybe the English sounds a bit better?
Not needed, fine as is
‘Very increased’ does sound a bit off, ngl
Markedly increased (this card) vs mildly increased (nid:1463280041950) does sound better imho
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The little bit of jankiness might make it stick a bit more 
it’s not terribly constructed as is necessarily
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Exactly, that’s what i meant by my suggestion