@Michael_B, not sure on this one. On one hand, seems harmless. On the other, not necessarily terribly necessary as a population-wide update. Thoughts?
Definitely agree with your assessment there. Since P/S is often very application-based, I lean towards including this. The only scenario I’d probably not include it is if it’s too long and there isn’t a reasonable way to make it more concise. In this case, the example is pretty to-the-point
To really emphasize the point behind the definition, I swapped “they might simply look” with “they might only look”