[08.20.2024] Updated content, AnKing-MCAT/AnKingMed, ID 2035358

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Agreed for the most part. The only thing that gives me pause is the phrasing “follows a group of individuals back at events…”

@learnankihub I think it’s important to keep “follows a group of individuals” because that is the same as the prospective and the more they match the less likely people will memorize them based on wording alone. Maybe the cloze can be “backwards through time at events that have already taken place (into the past).”

The ‘follows a group’ part I agree is essential to the card and the concept, but the phrasing ‘follows a group back at’ sounds off.

@learnankihub this is what i think would sound better:

A Retrospective Cohort study follows a group of individuals {{c1::backwards through time at events that have already taken place (into the past)

alternatively this might be better:

A Retrospective Cohort study follows a group of individuals {{c1:: within a defined period in the past (into the past)}}.

Agreed those are both I think nicer ways to phrase.

I sort of like the ‘backwards’ because it contrasts nicely with ‘following forward’ as in a prospective study, though from a purely grammatical perspective i wonder if ‘follow backwards’ isn’t a bit of an unwieldy phrasing. What do you think?

Yea that was my first instinct but I thought u didn’t like it when I mentioned it in my first response.

No, it’s not that. It was the phrasing ‘follows back at’ that I thought just sounded disjointed grammatically. :slight_smile:

Looking back my response wasn’t clear, I suppose; I was intending to agree with you and draw a contrast to the very first phrasing as a way of agreeing that the latter part of your message I thought was more fitting. Maybe my fault for excessive brevity. :slight_smile:

Oh ok, I edited the suggestion to include the backwards statement take a look and edit it if it needs any further.

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